Gavin Laking
(Hazel Grove, Stockport, UK)
Posted: 01/04/2008, 13:36:44
Very colourful up to the part where you start using text and then it all seems to go a little pear shaped. The navigation could do with a little definition as some of the colour blend or clash quite harsh which affects readability.
You need to look at the text and make it more readable- break it up a bit more and use better line spacing and different font sizes.
Hope that helps.